I reach for the sun and laugh while my hand covers in blisters.
Author notes
Prompt: "Time you enjoy wasting is not wasted." John Lennon
AP Name: Goodnight
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired - 10-15 words / 20 Poets by Kiddy.
600 points, ended November 26, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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Beautiful imagery here..a line that will be running in my mind for sure...
Good luck in the contest!
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Wow. Just, wow. This was stunning, and I'm speechless. Beautiful work. Thank-you so much for this read. Best of luck to you.
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Wow. That was really profound. The image I got in my head was a little sick and disturbing, but still utterly amazing. Nice job!
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Loved the sentiment, although not sure about the construction of 'my hand covers in blisters' - 'my hand blisters' works better for me
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Fantastic take!!!!
To rejoice despite the suffering!!!
Peace in light and love
Noah
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Good write.
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Nicely done, interesting take on the prompt; reach for the sun, beautiful
good luck in the contest
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Very interesting as FDR once quoted "there is nothing to fear but fear itself." Good luck in the contest and happy trails
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Ouch I don't think I would be happy with blisters but this is interesting take on the prompt thanks for sharing be well
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Nicely written.
but do you mind putting your name, the prompt(quote) details in your Author Notes.
All the best
Cheers
kiddy
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Sure, sorry about that, I was slightly confused about how you are supposed to set up the entry.
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