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Taken

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I’m there,

                   The chill of winter’s ash hits bone

                                Shivering across tainted sunsets

  

                           The lone crow cries to the unknown

                                 Breaking thought without redemption

  

                               I shatter, a million ice tears

                                        Carried with the west winds

  

                                      Preying, someday

                                                          I’ll reach you

 

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  • Firequeen
    October 31, 2008

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    heartbreakingly painful my love
    and a feeling i have felt all to many times.
    wonderful.
    i love you


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    So softly and beautiful...lovely metaphor and imagery...a soft sigh in your words...well done.
    thank you for entering.
    mystic


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    So beautiful
    The pic above is gorgeous as well
    The imagery/metaphors were very good and this was a great poem