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Copper to gold

Once a hard metal
w
h
o
's
CoLoUr was d_u_l_l
Till 1 day the sun had \\\\\\Shone/////
Made the C
              o
          p      w
        p    o
    e    l
r    G


Gold as it w.e.r.e
N
o
w
Turn-ed to r+u+s+t
Wi
sh
I can turn *time back*
To return to (gold)

Author notes

5. My insides are copper, and I'd kill to make them gold

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