Believe it or not
I have been lying to you
to every one really
I have a secret life
one that no one knows about
on the outside I’m a tough cookie
I’m shy to strangers
and loud around you
I have a secret life
and this you’re not a part of
In my secret life
I don’t listen to your kind of music
I talk to strangers like I would you
yes I have a secret life
and it’s a different life
without you round me
I feel free but empty
I have a choice to make
I have a secret life
but do I keep it?
I have made my decision
and I’m sorry to do this
but you’re not a part of my secret life
I have a secret life
and the joy of having a new personally is strangling my real life
please tell me what you think..
Comments
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oh the end is sad, it's a good poem but it's still sad. i like theme of the secret life, and having to leave a loved one behind, it sounds like a painful decision, but you captured it beautifully in words. i like the line "without you round me i feel free but empty" it really speaks to me, i've felt that way before and i don't want to feel it again. good job
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