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Christmas is coming

Christmas is coming
so don't foget my gift.
I want something really nice
something I can hold
to touch as I please.
It has to be bright
so elegant as well.
So what can you get me,
let me think for a moment
I know, what about you.

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  • Sandygram silver member
    November 25, 2008

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    Sweet Christmas Poem.

    Now this briought a smile and was a delight to read. Nice to read a cheerful poem. You take care and I hope Santa brings you what you want and you are smiling Christmas morn.

    Ho Ho Ho,
    Sandy


  • Patpowers silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    I wish I could get you something...nice job on this work on poetry. GOOD romantic end to this. THANKS!!