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I forgive you

I'll forgive you
Though you did me wrong, I'll forgive what you do
Do you remember our years?
I remember all too well the tears and fears
I'll forgive you because I am no longer weak
Happiness and truth are all I seek
Will you ever man up to the things you've done?
Our three became one
Look where you are
Have you gotten far?
Have your cruel words and actions helped you out?
Really stop and think what I was about
All the love I gave
And still you were to hard to save

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    Well Done.

    Nice to read you again my friend.

    Peace, Timothy