Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Wasting Waste

Quietly, in silence, peeking around corners,
searching life in the midst of death.


Author notes

Noah20Tymatal
Prompt Quote #2
"Time you enjoy wasting is not wasted"
John Lennon

A contest entry

GIVE ME YOUR HONEST REACTION

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 7 of 7

  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 31, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    How profound...this really gets to the core...good luck in the contest=you have a great and thoughtful entry lol

  • copper29
    October 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Wow. Awesome imagery. I love the idea that one should try to live before he/she dies. Good luck in the contest!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Interesting write to ponder about.


  • Canadamomma
    October 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    sad poem, very nice take on the prompt
    Good luck in the contest

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I think that this is interesting while waiting death we search for the life that we should live thanks for sharing be well

  • Crescitvirtus
    October 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    A noble pursuit Noah. peeking around corners - it is our inquisitiveness that marks us out as a species. Although - maybe it's just me being thick - I din't get the title.


  • Kiddy
    October 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Fantastic. I loved the way you have titled the poem.
    Good job.all the best
    Love
    -kiddy

1 - 7 of 7