Insatiable,
in a dream,
I covered you
in double cream.
A contest entry
- An Erotic Side Challenge by Master Ktulu.
700 points, ended November 2, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i really enjoyed this entry and the way you use your ten words.
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I have to agree, the mental image is delicious. Tasty writing!
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Thanks, as I said before, delicious in thought and delicious in practice.
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This is wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I loved the rhyme and the image. I think you did a spectacular job on this one. I think this is my favorite so far. Well done on a short piece of erotica. I could not have done better myself even if I applied myself in all my dreams.
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I covered you
in double cream.
That's quite an image. Well done. Good luck
**Master Ktulu** -
Oh yummy is my thoughts with this one.
Riftkin
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Thank you. Yummy in thought and yummy in practice.
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Sounds like it.
Best of luck to you.
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I like this one from you hon! Good luck in the contest
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Thank you very much. Short but sweet. lol
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