The road is narrow and long
it's taken me places
I might never have gone.
Author notes
Anywhere is walking distance if you've got the time (Steven Wright).
AP name - davidwright
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired - 10-15 words / 20 Poets by Kiddy.
600 points, ended November 26, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good short poem, covers a lot of ground. Happy trails, neighbour.
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hmm fellow traveler, happy for the journey
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Nice take on the prompt. I love the idea behind this poem and the last line is a good conclusion. Good luck in the contest!
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thank you
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nicely done . . good luck in the contest
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Great thought
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Excellent, has a definitive tone to it that rocks lol and good luck.
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Beautiful take on the prompt
good luck in the contest
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I think that this is good and it holds much truth walking roads of life are sometimes hard and long but in the end we will get to where we are going thanks for sharing be well
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Great! This forces me into reflection of the past and future in my life.
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Reminded me of two of my favourite songs (He aint heavy - he's my brother and 'The long and winding road' by the Beatles) so you were onto a good start here.
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Awesome!
great take... It reminds me of Robert Frost 'Road not taken'
Good job there
All the best
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Well Expressed! Best wishes in life and the contest
Peace in light and love
Noah
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