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I’m growing up

Every year this same routine
A pretty costume deserves to be seen

Going to the doors of strangers houses
Seeing the same women with tacky Halloween blouses

Yet somehow this is not the same
Its starting become a pain

Is this because I’m growing up
or is it some strange form bad luck

I’ll keep quiet for little sister
As I hear her cute voice saying “excuse me mister”

We have enough sweets to stash away
Keep them for a rainy day

Later on I talk to my mother
she explains that the same thing happened to my brother

You grow out of some things like you grow out of the costumes
Does this mean my future holidays are going to be doomed?

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 23, 2008

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    Getting all dressed for halloween does get to be a production at times doesn't it? I really enjoyed reading this, it's different and I like that


  • Babydoll6969
    November 4, 2008
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    Hey I really like This one Its Cool