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Pilgrimage (or Hagia Sophia)

 

O Troubadour, old ghost, pick up your bones in Rome,
And rush you underground, the Hell Hound Strays --
Go kiss the Queen, you fool, go towards the Dome!

The maps are meaningless -- a maze, a tome --
For mystics walk to live the Hour of Days!
O Troubadour, old ghost, pick up your bones in Rome!

Who ventures here, O Pilgrim, who must roam?!
Your path will shift with snakes who trace your ways!
Go kiss the Queen, you fool, go towards the Dome!

Beware! -- Lest Gorgon's eye splint you with chrome!
Trip' steel will guard you well if True Shape plays --
O Troubadour, old ghost, pick up your bones in Rome!

And when you see Her glimmer in the gloam --
Her Breast, that Golden Cupula, Milk-Rays --
Go! Kiss the Queen, you fool! -- Go towards the Dome!

Behold the Finger of God:  Hush... Shalom.
The Secret Crush of us Whose touch un-clays...
O Troubadour, old ghost, pick up your bones in Rome,
Go kiss the Queen, you fool, go towards the Dome!

 

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  • Night Hope gold member
    November 16
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    I always loved this one, too. So many of yours were among my favorites on the site. And elsewhere, besides.



  • apropos
    November 27, 2008
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    i wish i had the cleverness with these forms that you have! wonderful.


  • Maatkara gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Sancta Sophia

    Ah, you reposted my favorite .. kept all the best lines, so not sure where you've revised (apart from adding my reference to Hagia Sophia in the title). As I said before, it is so renaissance-rich in archetypal images, connotations and allusions - like studying a detailed tapestry, with the mystery and wonder of Matrism.

    The Troubadours ('Fideli d'Amore') have always interested me, with their poetic spiritual 'heresy' of Love over dogma and Papal oppression (not just itinerent minstrels of courtly love, but purveyors of secret Wisdom doctrines hidden in metaphor), They, along with the Cathars were wiped out by the Inquisition (or so it was thought )

    "At the end of seven hundred years, the laurel will be green once more."
    - Anonymous Troubadour, 13th Century


    • Victory Gin silver member
      November 2, 2008
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      Yay for the green laurel, yay for the Troubadours!

      Love before piety is a good motto.


  • malmadre gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    Well crafted! I love the form


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    Maestro...


  • just mercedes gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    I watched Fellini's 'Roma' last night, and the visuals that stayed with me are the fading of colours in the newly-discovered frescoes, in the path of the subway under the city, the beauty disappearing rapidly before our eyes.

    Your poem evokes much of the same sensations - poignant regret for the loss of old beauty.

    I love the tie to the Hagia Sophia - temple of wisdom - her very architecture contains esoteric secrets available only to the initiated.

    Troubador, you have sung another lovely song.


  • dustytiger
    October 29, 2008

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    this almost seems like the beginning of an epic! i really like it, the rhyme scheme works perfectly, and it's made me want to go and get a book on roman history just for the sake of reading about it. great poem, i enjoyed it so much.

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