Mirror mirror on the wall...
Fuck you.
She/He/It
Blanket terms (break a face [a mask :new subject:])
Trace the lines of bones
Of facial structure (Muscles better hold on for dear life)
Melt it
Empty eye [sockets]
She is beautiful -we all want to fuck her-
Mutilation is in the mindset of the blade-holder
And we all like to feel good
(yes mother)
Kick it
The drug (sex) addiction which makes her human
Every time something's in her
She re-learns to breathe
:a daily routine is needed:
Love it
Like your own baby
Nurture it (breast-feeder) and help it grow
Until you can look it in the eye
And see nothing
Author notes
Name: MessedupMarionette
**Heartbroken Headcase**
I chose option III
A contest entry
- First contest,Four options, i'll love you forever if you enter? by Jaffa-.
560 points, ended November 11, 2008, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me honestly what you think, please.
Comments
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Blanket terms (break a face [a mask :new subject:])
-Gosh, i really like this.
Empty eye [sockets]
-great use of dirty pretty=]
this is excellent. bitter and dry. -
I'll let you know exactly what I think when I read it two more times. (three readings=what I do with good poetry.) I might just tell you in person, too
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Aw, you're a sweetie pie!
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........Wow........
-sits for about 20 minutes speachless-
wow, that was absolutly amazing.. i was blown away, you used dirty pretty, and the emotion, the descriptions, oh i think i'm in love ?WELL DONE!! and a very big good luck in my contest.
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