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From Painting Poetry: Poetry and Art by Painting Poet

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  • Jalalbad gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    if this can bring a smile through gloomy eyes
    I admire the writing . love the fireworks


  • Rachel Kruger
    November 1, 2008

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    Beautiful picture to match a beautiful poem. The word play for this birthday card is excellent! It will be excellent for the wider market.

    Love it!

    Rach xxx


  • Leonura
    November 1, 2008

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    how truly interesting, it almost looks like a card! truly such talent is amazing. and the poem is heartfelt and loving.. beautiful.


  • butterflygrl
    November 1, 2008
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    love it


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 1, 2008
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    Your write surely brings a smile in anyones heart
    Nicely done dear poetess


  • punk
    November 1, 2008
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    i agree with cricketjeff..this would make an excellent birthday card


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Great Birthday sound

    I think you should tart selling Birthday cards!!!


    • Ceridwens Soul silver member
      November 1, 2008
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      I'm thinking that as I did the same with Carrion Hunter, just experimenting for now mixing the two together

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