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Terror

Falling backwards as
Devil wings tip
Across my icy skin
Freezing me in a permanent state of
Fear and
Agonizing despair----
Whispered lies swallow me,
Threatening to engulf
Me whole, and
Caging me successfully....

                      ...in the realms of absolute darkness


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Basically, I wrote this in an attempt to overcome my annoying insomnia...It didn't work...

AP: EuphoricDysphoria

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  • iamthebeatles
    December 28, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this. It's very fascinating and frightening all the same. the last line is superb, a fantastic finish to a glorious and dark edged poem.
    Wonderful

    cassie


    • tsukiyo
      December 28, 2008
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      Thank you I'm glad you liked it so much ^^

      ∞ Anneliese ∞