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Queen Akor

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Moving with stealth and whispering a silent prayer.

I move and sneak into the black dragoness’ lair.

Slowly moving only by feel, I came upon a secret door.

Walking in I am trapped by Akor and her children four.

 

Her youngest son breathes fire and I begin my futile attack.

Her tail knocks me out with one smooth sure whack.

Later I wake to her beautiful eyes, sweating from her angers heat.

She asks me why did I come, to destroy her kids and her defeat?

 

I had nothing to else to lose, so I began recounting my story, true.

For I am dead but maybe Lurtore the Red Dragon will get his due.

My name is Boadicea dragon witch from the southern plains.

I wish you or yours no harm, your blood flows through my veins.

 

By force of will I come at Lurtore’s bidding, for your precious hair.

For a magic powerful potion that is potent, special and very, very rare.

If I come back without, the red dragon will kill Oisin, my lover and mate.

Akor seek your revenge, for Oisin and I it is already far too late.

 

Before my eyes, the Black Dragoness, Queen Akor began to transform.

Flowing black hair with fiery highlights, the Queen in human form.

With a evil smirk, about the potion Akor wanted to know more.

She told me, first we get back Oisin, then we begin this war.

 

 

 

Art by Jessica Galberth

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Eusebius
    January 15, 2009

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    Most certain a very involved and well thoughout tale we have here, nicely done in this fantastical quatrains... bravo!


  • SulfurFiend
    November 12, 2008

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    FANTASTIC!!!

    well first of all i love dragons and how you put that in a poem and your ryhming...just WOW! it has amazed me. you might wanna check out my "becoming a dragon"


  • Mykeee
    November 12, 2008

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    wow - this was amazing. very creative. I never would have thought to take it in this direction. Very very impressive. Glad I stopped by to check it out. Conggrats on the Gold as well - Mykeeeee


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Thank you for entering this contest I held.
    I loved your take on the prompt you picked.

    Best of luck to you.

    Riftkin


  • Brazos silver member
    October 30, 2008

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    Yet another tale so beautiful and blue,
    Of love unending your tale rings true.
    Beware the Black Dragoness I beg you now,
    For deceit and desire doth drive her plow.

    Your true lover Oisen with her she takes,
    And with your bloods her thirst she slakes.

    Wonderfull written, poetess, and quite the magic tale as well!!

    Brazos


  • ennovy silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    Dynamic Dark Poem & Read

    you have truly taken this imagery of yours to another beautiful vivid level...How clever your mind wraps around the each word, you talent is masterful, beyond...excellent my dear...novy


  • Yahiko
    October 29, 2008
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    I love love love this! I have never read anything like it to be honest with you...impressive

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