&I breathe in the cold air
Slowing the stasis in my body.
It's moments like this one
That I feel most at home.
It's succint moments like this
I don't feel the need to atone,
When I don't feel as if I'm
Going down the rabbit hole.
Author notes
Dancing Marionette bbyy;;;
i loveee you
pppssss
we need to talkkk.
A contest entry
- 50 words: Winter by whiterabbit..
500 points, ended November 27, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you know
one of my favorite things about your poems is the effing vocabulary lol
because im sitting here reading this and i'm trying to figure out what the hell stasis and atone is haha. im such a blonde. but yeaaaaaaa you got a trophy for this one!!! gooo you, you awesome writer! :]
loooove you more than all them silly boys
-Soph
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Good write.
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I love this bby. I love the picture that you've created and the emotions that come through this. I love how you've captured a moment of time. Beautiful doll.
ilysfm
& we do need to talk
message me with what's been going on, k?
x
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