I forgave you,
did not forget.
Prison bitch,
you don't deserve
your son.
Please rot where you stand.
Author notes
Exactly 18 words. Written for my son's father, who is Sr. (hate now, that my son's a jr. but oh well) Had to try this one, since I tried the other version.
In a list
A contest entry
- Are You Up For A Mean Ass Quickie? by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended November 15, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Ouch
don't hate the name it is your son's. Though the dad is not a good man, the son is still good. A name is just that unless it is yourown! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker
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goodness! i thought i was the most hateful thing walking the earth i have like a bunch of mean ass people in this contest
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Well Expressed Indeed!
That's gotta be tough. Peace.
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