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Rainbow Memories

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I had a dream of a seashore

water was crystal clear;

sky was filled with an amber hue,

I felt free without a care.

 

Trees were smiling a cheerful wave,

leaves fell with grace;

dancing in air with a colorful flare,

wonderful whimsical pace.

 

I seen from afar, twinkling star;

it seemed to be calling me near,

I tried to respond but it was beyond;

it's bright lights left vision unclear.

 

Drawn to the light of the twinkling sight

determined to find a course,

colorful streams formed guiding beams

directing me straight to the source.

 

I was surprised, when before my eyes

appeared a staircase of emeralds and gold,

lustrous glow, calestriel flow;

vision to behold.

 

I stood in awe of what I saw,

staircase to the star;

I felt an embrace as I moved in this space,

on these steps that came from afar.

 

Encircling me and lifting me free,

I slowly moved from the ground;

my mind was still, I lost my will,

I knew I was heaven bound.

 

I glanced behind I was surprised to find,

my form had remained below;

merging with streams of the colorful beams

I soared into a colorful bow.

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3) b. RAinbow Memories

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 18, 2008

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    Awww, that's so beautiful. Makes it sound like a beautiful place that I want to be. It makes me think of how my parents described Cuba. They just got back yesterday, lucky gits.

  • piccola silver member
    October 31, 2008

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    what a beautiful vision you have penned. Nice rhyme and flow and it gives a peaceful feeling too. thank you for entering


  • Malabu
    October 30, 2008

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    and who could not envision themself in your beautiful poem...where only one with such an enchanted heart can lead you...

    mal

  • goalsv
    October 29, 2008

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    Beautiful poem and great job with the theme of the contest. This was so perfect for it, loved the last line, it ends it perfectly.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    looks like..

    you gave the judge exactly what she asked for! lovely start to finish sis! good stuff!


  • who iam
    October 29, 2008

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    Wonderful Dream

    Hopefully ,this dream will become reality one day;
    uplifting grace,,smooth flow,nice rhyme,beautiful picture of the pathway to His place!


  • Tqop
    October 29, 2008
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    Feel free to check out my poem: Wait just a Minute.
    Thanks.

  • Tqop
    October 29, 2008

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    Very Good.

    I liked the opening lines:
    I had a dream of a seashore

    where the water was crystal clear;

    the sky was filled with an amber hue,

    I felt free without a care.

    In addition: I like the title of the poem.

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