& as the snow falls--

& wandering through the alleyway,
snow kisses breach all rules &
raise volcanoes on my exterior.

fingers grapple with the need
to fit in the spaces left between
them & then the want to explore
within thoughts.

it's far too cold to unravel here--

shall we do it anyway?

Author notes

Kiss the girl--x

Fifty words exactly

I tried sweetie, I hope you like it & it is related to winter I swear
It snowed last night, it was so beautiful.
ly♥

A contest entry

50 words: Winter by whiterabbit.. 500 points, ended November 27, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Comments

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whiterabbit.
November 26, 2008

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I love this sweetie. I just adore the way you write. I love "snow kisses", it just sounds so cute and loverly ♥
Amazing poem bby.
ly♥
Sandra R Reynolds
November 2, 2008
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Very loverly hope she likes it too.
snow-angel
November 1, 2008

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yay, snow! ♥ i adore the snow, it`s so beautiful. ♥

'& wandering through the alleyway,
snow kisses breach all rules &
raise volcanoes on my exterior.'

i love 'snow kisses', what sweet imagery. ♥

loni, i la la love your poems, sweetie. ♥

&loves&kisses, always. ♥
faderman1959
October 29, 2008

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Nicely done! I can definitely relate to and enjoy this write. We've only had a few flurries here.