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Live (Etheree)

Live
with zest
Never rest
Do what is best
and you will be blessed
You'll have lots of  sorrow
should you wait 'til tomorrow
So don't delay, live life today
Not half hearted but firm, come what may
In no way allow commitment to stray

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Live life today tomorrow may never bw.Shahrukh Khan

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  • chilali
    October 29, 2008
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    I love the rhymes. A very lovely write. Best to you in the contest


  • Kiddy
    October 29, 2008

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    That's so sweet... Nicely written...
    The flow is very natural and rhymes dont seem to be forced...
    Thanks for entering
    Love
    Kiddy