Live
with zest
Never rest
Do what is best
and you will be blessed
You'll have lots of sorrow
should you wait 'til tomorrow
So don't delay, live life today
Not half hearted but firm, come what may
In no way allow commitment to stray
Author notes
Live life today tomorrow may never bw.Shahrukh Khan
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A contest entry
- 8 to 10 great lines - Quote Inspired by Kiddy.
600 points, ended December 12, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the rhymes. A very lovely write. Best to you in the contest
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That's so sweet... Nicely written...
The flow is very natural and rhymes dont seem to be forced...
Thanks for entering
Love
Kiddy


