When you talk to me
I feel as if you are singing in my ears all melodious and mesmerizing tunes
When I look at you I think the entire floral Queensland stands before me with a visual delight
When I love to live with you my heart and soul stream high into my joy space
You are my music You are my aesthetics You are my philosophy You are my life filled with love!!!
WHEN YOU ARE NOT WITH ME I am an instrument without needed reeds
and a sky without moon and stars and also a sea without a ship to sail along
Author notes
Without music, life would be a mistake.
A contest entry
- 8 to 10 great lines - Quote Inspired by Kiddy.
600 points, ended December 12, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful
Dear sweet man, how your words bring such joy to my heart when I read them.
You write with such a beautiful loving heart.
Your poems are always filled with much emotion that the reader can 'feel' when reading your penned words.
The visuals that you weave into your writes are always very clear.
You are a pleasure to read my friend, and I wish you all the best in this contest.
Much love and happiness I send to you.
Your AP friendly Angel
~Angel-anne~
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you are filled with feelings, great write. I have to agree with Kiddy
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It's a lovely write.. I thoroughly enjoyed it...
I would be happy if it sticks to the rules... b'coz when other poems do so, it won't be fair on my part to judge this one after the contest is closed...
Dear mate, you still have time to work on it... I will come back to it again... Pls, revisit and do the need....
THanks for entering and your time...
Great write
Kiddy
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Beautiful poem Purush. I agree with you. Without music life would be terrible. I love music. Thank you for sharing this with us. God bless you.
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