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From my birth, Through my blood

The BEST invisible friend I have, from my birth
starting from my mother's lullaby

Yet Another LIFE within me, where I am
the center of my worlds

Having HER as a girlfriend, when I am
in tight and broken moods

And HIM as a boyfriend, when I am
in bright and lifting moods

Mingled within ME right through my blood
till my death MY MUSIC...

A contest entry

This is my first poem online. What do u feel at it?

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  • Venugopal gold member
    November 4, 2008
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    to have invisible presence is uplifting! nice sentiments expressed here!


  • queen Moderators member
    October 30, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi pugazhl

    Very cool poem, i enjoyed reading it good luck in the contest please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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