as you inhale the essence of passion's scent,
fingertips caress the subtle offering I give
for pleasure
taking all of me is without consideration or
demand
close your eyes to life's bitter claims and
dream of a total sensory eclipse
Author notes
prompt:
take all of me
40 words
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 15 entries 40 words or less #25 by mysticstorm.
650 points, ended October 30, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
So very creative and well expressed. Congratulations on the silver. It was well deserved.
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Very nice...love the word choice, flow and metaphor...soft sensual feel to the whole thing...great ending...well done.
thank you for sharing!
mystic -
A total sensory eclipse. Oh I loved that. Nice nice nice. ~Pamela
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