Take my hand,
exclusively,
and, everything will be fine,
you must not mourn
know it's difficult
but don't feel alone.
If feel wrong,
can't overlook
knew, hurts to fall,
even seems no end
that's not easy,
but I'll be there.
Author notes
Prompt: TAKE ALL OF ME
40 words
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 15 entries 40 words or less #25 by mysticstorm.
650 points, ended October 30, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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How sweet and loving...very soft touch of true depth in feelings...nicely done...thank you for sharing.
mystic -
true and sincere. True love always gives options, doesn't it? Real care for the other one is well captured here. Good write. All the best in the contest
Love
Kiddy
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