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Memories Of Us

All things end
at the end of the sky.
The bridge is fading
as that autumn feeling
breathes with memories
of snow kissed flow.

Red flames of roses
rain again,
but the wind knows
how to calm spirits
with imagination's smile.

Don't cry Adeline,
for life is a silent surface
and the light of the angels
will bring peace to midnight.

You were my biggest heroine
and your fireworks
brought me to the horizon
where I can still believe.

Author notes

Titles Used -
the bridge
breathing with memories
snow kissed
the wind knows
roses
end of the day
red flames
rain again
all things end
fading
flow
calm spirits
autumn feeling
don't cry
imagination
smile
bring me the horizon
fireworks
i still believe
my biggest hero
adeline
silent surface
brings peace to midnight
light of the angel
life

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  • Edited
    October 31, 2008
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    a beautiful peace about this write, thoroughly enjoyed the read.
    thank you


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    Wow! All those titles used and formed such a brilliant write!!

    You are so good at these types of writes hun!


  • Cali
    October 29, 2008
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    Beautiful.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    A most tasty concoction of diction and metaphor here, very clever Gaylene, just brilliant!


    Sincerely,
    mj.