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Change Is Gonna Do Ya Good.

Empty pockets
and broken dreams
among the tired,
the huddled and the poor  
drove them in hordes,
to the tiny
curtained booths,
to punch out
their frustrations,
and retrieve
just a chad
of their dignity.

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    This is so sad, and by the sound of things Americans know better than anyone. Best to you in the contest