the best of me is hidden
perhaps not all in one place
and not so easy to find
it would not be wise
to pick and choose
or leave parts of me behind
Author notes
title is the prompt
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 15 entries 40 words or less #25 by mysticstorm.
650 points, ended October 30, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ah, this is lovely indeed, and very thoughful. How many facets do we have, both known and unknown? Beautifully written!
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Humm...yes yes..very logical and very beautiful expressiuon you did while revealing the status of the self..I love it..well done..
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Very nice...creative and deep thoughts...we are all blended pieces of a maze and that is what makes us so special...lovely flow and meaning...thank you for sharing!
mystic -
great
Such a great piece of work that you have managed to scramble into a few lines and so meaningful.
Love this.
TC
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Excellent! Loved this concise and wonderful poem. ~Pamela
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It's very thoughtful and deep. it is realized that everyone has a blend of different nature, best of which are hidden and only few are visible/known to others... I took it in this way....
Thanks for sharing.
All the best.
Love
Kiddy -
wow
that was.......amazing.......good luck in the contest and wow
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