My lips held
his last goodbye,
long after what was plane
became a speck in my empty skies,
His heart chose a one-way ticket
that left me an afterthought,
between his vodka on the rocks,
and some cheese and crackers.
My lips held
his last goodbye,
long after what was plane
became a speck in my empty skies,
His heart chose a one-way ticket
that left me an afterthought,
between his vodka on the rocks,
and some cheese and crackers.
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #19 by AutumnGypsy.
550 points, ended November 1, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Oh just superb, this left me with the longing they must have felt, I love the vodka and ricks sentiment. Best to you in the contest
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