Mother’s kiss
God’s bliss
Lover’s hug
I always beg
Talent’s art
I give my heart
Emotions spring
Wedding bells ring
Scream at my high
Delivered a baby
Mother’s Love
Child, I bestow
Dear, take all of me
Just smile back
Author notes
take all of me
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 15 entries 40 words or less #25 by mysticstorm.
650 points, ended October 30, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Do you have emotions? by Forgotten Anomaly.
550 points, ended October 27, 182 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Wanna know what you think
Comments
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I like how you wrote this with short lines and brisk stanzas, It makes the poem seem more powerful somehow to be written in that manner. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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Very creative and thought provoking...nice flow and sweet ending...thank you for sharing.
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Gorgeous
Such a really touching piece , great writing xxx
The end of the poem is so beautiful and emotional !
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that is really good. I love how you said "Dear, talk all of me Just smile back" that's reall cool nice job
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