take not
just the good times,
filled with laughter
and frivolity
embrace the other half too
the sadness, angst
and regret
a whole person,
all the yesterdays'
moulded who I am now
Author notes
Prompt: TAKE ALL OF ME
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 15 entries 40 words or less #25 by mysticstorm.
650 points, ended October 30, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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How wonderfully true...it takes the bad to appreciate the good and help us real know and enjoy life...lovely imagery and words of truth...thank you for sharing.
mystic -
very nice flowing, as i also strive to benefit from yesterday.
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we all benefit from our own yesterday's, sometimes we just don't see it for awhile.
Juls
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this is truth of the utmost
the bad allows the good to be better
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I LOVE IT SIS!!!!
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It's a nice poem about oneself.... it's very introspective...
You take inspiration from the prompt deep from your heart...
unique!
Good luck
Love
Kiddy -
And rightly so here, everything makes You the person You are and if a friend of C's She speaks so highly then it's good enough for Me. Well done.
MM
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