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Unduly Pressed Upon

Missing image

 

Octavian: 

 

 

Do I linger into this passing phase,

to hold you in my gaze, until tranfixt-

imagine that a kiss from you has since

been surely signed, and equally pressed upon.  

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A contest entry

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  • Purrsanthema
    April 13
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    Very interesting. Very lovely.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Stunning, I don't think there is any other word I can use, I love the old shakespearean language. Best to you in the contest


  • Alyzeh
    October 29, 2008

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    Wow. This is amazing. I loved the picture, the background and your words. A perfect package! Lovely write! Good luck in the contest.