Floating around in this empty space,
with nothing to ground me for sustenance
but your sweet voice,
speaking to me,
begging me to come back to you
so we can be One again:
one body and one soul
that are forvever intertwined.
Because without you,
I feel empty inside.
Author notes
You don't have a soul. You have a body. You are a soul. C.S. Lewis i think
A contest entry
- 8 to 10 great lines - Quote Inspired by Kiddy.
600 points, ended December 12, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
You don't have a soul. You have a body. You are a soul.
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so caring and loving sentiments penned with feeling, nice poem
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Hmmmm
Nicely written and conveys the emotional loneliness of separation... I think you'll do well.... Best of luck.
Ken
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Aww! I loved this. I loved that last two lines the most though. Great take on the quote Well done. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
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Awww..so sweet, this touched my heart. Good luck in the contest.
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Hi there..it's such a beautiful poem..I would be happy, if you put in your author notes the quote you inspired with and its author name....
Good job there...
Love
Kiddy
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i just placed the quote that inspired me and i thank you for the comment and reminding me!
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