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Hindsight

Painless marks
  reminds aching past

Bygone days
  speeds up the count of heartbeats

Scenes are fresh,
  renews the wounds
    penetrates veins
    teaches new lesson

  'Until your breath
  I will never die'

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Old Scar

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Such a sad little piece. I felt my heart drop towards the end of this with the pain it held in its lines. best to you in the contest