Long voyage
he embarks
First farewell
after wedding bells
Months together
I will miss
lovely kisses his lips would give.
Stood wordless
with tears-filled eyes
my lips held his goodbye
Author notes
my lips held his goodbye
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #19 by AutumnGypsy.
550 points, ended November 1, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Wanna know what you think
Comments
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To lose someone to far away is one of the hardest things to deal with, to know they are there, you just can't touch them. Well written. Best to you in the contest
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Beautifully written. I loved the language and the emotion in this piece.
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