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Silent Guilt



Tears fall like words on pages never read,

tattered by life

scars run deep which never heal
soul heavy with spoon feed guilt,

gentle spirit haunted by memories
pieces of her heart scattered
on floor of lost hopes 



             ~some hearts never mend.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Oh how I can relate to this brilliantly written piece! Nice! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    This is so much of how I feel at the moment. Spoon fed guilt is the worst kind, it can never be sweetened either. it hits that part of your heart you believe they can't touch. Brilliant. best to you in the contest


  • Lexie - gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    oh wow!!!

    this is FANTASTICAL BRILLIANCE with a twist of YOU!!
    your rock and ya know it


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    Very powerful and sad. no, some hearts never mend, merely bandaged to move on.

    Wonderful write!


  • daviscth silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    Oh wow!!! This is a wonderful piece of writing sis!!! Your imagery is so vivid, the words almost jump off the page when read. Best of luck in the contest.

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