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Vainglory

Absurd!

Damaged self-esteem
  Dominates, orders, rules
  Over weaker blacks
      Ignores social rapport


Pride, the vanity factor
Conquers the empty minds
    Befriends not dark complexioned
      Discriminates them just to hurt


- All for filling her empty pockets

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Prompt : empty pockets

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    There is power in them there words as they say, you did a brilliant job of standing tall and shouting your message. Brilliant, you captured something amazing here. I was captivated by your colouring outside the lines. I love it. Best to you in the contest


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    Excellent! A very strong and passionate write! All the best with this
    Gaylene


  • Cannonsfire
    October 29, 2008

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    Wow this has strength and power in the words, good luck in the contest. C