Absurd!
Damaged self-esteem
Dominates, orders, rules
Over weaker blacks
Ignores social rapport
Pride, the vanity factor
Conquers the empty minds
Befriends not dark complexioned
Discriminates them just to hurt
- All for filling her empty pockets
Author notes
Prompt : empty pockets
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #20 by Kuranya.
550 points, ended November 1, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Wanna know what you think
Comments
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There is power in them there words as they say, you did a brilliant job of standing tall and shouting your message. Brilliant, you captured something amazing here. I was captivated by your colouring outside the lines. I love it. Best to you in the contest
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Excellent! A very strong and passionate write! All the best with this
Gaylene
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Wow this has strength and power in the words, good luck in the contest. C
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