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the start of us (full version)

do you remember that time
it was when we first meet
you were looking at me
and i was looking at you
your fingers reached up
and caressed my cheek
tucking wind blown hair
back behind my ears
your words "your beautiful"
they caused me to blush
i just mumbled a reply
lent my head on your chest
the butterfly's how they danced
within side of my stomach
as i listen to your heart beat
and i fell in love all over again

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  • DawnKestrel
    October 31, 2008
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    You've done a great job here, good luck in my contest.