Maybe I'm Sick
I know I should ask for help
But I'm scared
That means admitting I have a problem
Which I don't want to do
My stomach aches
My head is spinning
It takes every ounce of energy I have
To walk up stairs
I bruise easily, everywhere
And I'm losing weight
IHardlyEat...
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I found this in the back of one of my books from school, it was written a couple of months ago
Please tell me what you think
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its very goood... and i hope ur problems get sorted
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Is this still how it is honey...?
You should tell me... cause you know I'd help you and keep your secrets if you needed me to...
No matter what. -
Words that don't want to be written
The idea of this poem is to say that the narrator does not want to admit they has a problem - but of course by penning the poem they do so. I especially like the last verse - there's an effective emphasis on "aches" and "spinning" and it ends with a chilling link to the modern issue of anorexia.
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I'm glad you got the idea of the poem. Thanks for your comment, I appreciate it
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Well then... I think we need to have a proper talk >.<
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