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[ Please don't give up, dear walls ]

Please don't give up, dear walls
Please don't give up, dear hearts
What you hear is just siren's calls
Please know that the sadness departs

Please don't give up, little bird
Please don't give up, little letter
Forget what in the past has occurred
And journey towards the better

Please don't give up, precious feet
Please don't give up, precious hope
I need you to reject the defeat
And know that as one we can cope

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