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Ignored

Ignored

People tend to ignore me,
I don't really mind if they forget me, no one's that perfect.

But I have found when I am ignored, it is hurtful,
even when they pretend to forget.

I have found that the people treat me like a dog.
Some have even called me one, but
Most of the time people tend to ignore me like one
And shoo me away.

In my humble opinion: a dog isn't ignored,
It gets fussed, and at least two walks a day.

People don't even give me a second looking.

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© jay (jjay) - written 29/10/08

I am a lonely person, this is my lament to what has been happening to me reacently

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  • sophia moonfairy
    October 31, 2008

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    awww this is a sad write I know what it's like to be ignore :/ by the people you love I always get ignore too by friends and family I can so relate to this piece you did an amazing job :] and it does hurt to be ignore they just don't realize the pain they can cause just by ignoring one person or more they don't know what its like to be lonely because they always have someone by their side :/ this really touched my heart I really enjoy reading this because I know exactly how you feel and if you ever need someone to talk to I am always here for you even if you don't think I am I keep my word if you ever need me just message me or add me if you msn maria_amor_dannt@hotmail.com and ignore the ex name -.- but yeah I am always available :] see ya and I love your name Jay keep on writing because you are good at it my favorite part was "But I have found when I am ignored, it is hurtful,
    even when they pretend to forget.

    I have found that the people treat me like a dog.
    Some have even called me one, but
    Most of the time people tend to ignore me like one
    And shoo me away." That amazing that has me thinking deeply


  • Jaffa-
    October 29, 2008

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    I really enjoyed the amount of emotion in this poem, i thought it was full of a great sadness that was expressed well. However i do beleave that it could be described more closely. Also could you please put your user name in the author notes.


  • Kiddy
    October 29, 2008

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    HEy JJay...
    Welcome to ALlpoetry...
    Your first poem is very nice.. A great start...
    The tone of sadness works out well with me....
    Thanks for sharing...keep writing...
    Love
    Kiddy

    b/w, I love ur name 'jay'