Time seems to pass like eternity,
I watched the petals of the rose wither,
One after another,
But i know you will never return to my side,
As i recollect memories we had together,
Nostalgia overwhelmed me,
I will never forget the happy and sad memories,
You gave me,
The memories will always be a part of me,
But i cannot change reality,
Tou have left me,
Leaving to antoher world,
My love for you will never change,
It will always remain the same,
Now and forever,
But you, however, did not,
Its okay, I won't blame you,
I just want to say,
Goodbye, my love.
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This is such a sweet poem. It was written with such love. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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very discriptive
i understand how u feel. i have had many hardships in many relationships. I have had 3 fiancees and they all cheated on me. its hard but you can get through it
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This was very sad and sweet.
"My love for you will never change"
I feel the same way right now.
Thank you for the entry.
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This is a very emotional piece. I like the themes of loss and acceptance. "But I cannot change reality". Many people find it difficult to aknowledge this fact and dwell on the way we want things to be rather than the way things are. its true that it's not what life throws at us but the way we deal with it that counts. Nice write. well done.
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this is great for a first entry, i liked this , very emotional and sad, welcome to ap i hope to read more soon
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great start out poem
read well i really could feelit...
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