Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

today may be my last


Today i will tell you i love you
Today i will tell you i look up to you
Today i will tell you my secret
Today i wont regret yesterday
Becaue everything i did
Was exactly what i wanted
Ill do everything and more
Because tomorrow may never come

Author notes

Live life to the fullest tomorrow may never be.
Shahrukh Khan

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 10 of 10

  • Horcrux.Breathing
    December 21, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    i like it. lots of strong confedent emotion used in this poem, well written


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    love it

    reminds me of my mantra
    today I choose to be happy,
    today i choose not to worry
    today I will not anger
    today I will do my work honestly
    today I will treat all people with respect

    loved the write my friend


  • Venugopal gold member
    November 4, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    yes, tomorrow is too far away to think today! a grea insightful poem in the contest


  • xKrista
    October 31, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    true poem.

    what a powerful poem!
    this is awesome and so true. we don't know if we have tomorrow so live life to the fullest.
    good luck in the contest!
    xx


  • Kiss the girl--x
    October 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    'Ill do everything and more
    Because tomorrow may never come'

    those two last lines, really just sum up everything, it's true to live your life to its fullest, well written


  • chilali
    October 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this! Good luck in the contest


  • Cannonsfire
    October 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Lovely thoughts, you do need an apostrophe in 'I'll' bu apart from this the words are felt with emotion. Good luck. C


  • smiling-angel
    October 29, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    excellent take on the prompt. best of luck in the contest

    sooty


  • Kiddy
    October 29, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I included this quote in my 'Life' list with a purpose... Importance of living on presence, I wanted, to be known/realized by everyone... Your take on it is awesome... good job...
    Thanks for entering
    Love
    Kiddy

1 - 10 of 10