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oh may I help you beyond a phrase, a room unused

speech of  pajamas
only nowadays dimpled
nostalgic pregnancy to start anew
say it again chimpanzee
isn't pumpkin seed
nose pronounced

saline not early
as her asking for checkers
in rising solution
and I storied the color
I'd be red to hop over black miscarriage
with real stimulation

this is fun came out of her mouth
and my computer as by this survival contrast

got taken out one gained move
of wiping out worry...
constructive with plot
thought ~ try trimester diet ranking category run
but not miles' assimilation
specied as flax breaking ground up
for tongue agreement
when way down need is water soluble
and this well is overwhelming
information -- over amniotic sac sympathy,
juicy cucumber succulence lachrymal lack back

soak especially on potato turn
or delicous sight of daughter in game
seeing rows as calendar going down
for nine month woman
beautiful free for more development
from spine beginning
facial features to stand with hand
can't uhaul

sad concern hints hits  stacked scared
a tie of chips prevails
lavish constant warning with a sliding fix
instead of warm feeling throughout baby bump

one spot tight with second piece
child compares nutrition versus trap
even combined necessity reenactment
in durable look at complexity
by plate of replies
not tackled in clear simplicity
as sunshine for chewing the fat
hardly the talk in picnic absorbing garden
provided in ripples of playing outside

towel board in grass
it stays on ridged representation
of caution not just decorated with that initially
but tallied to cheek bones
recognizing folate fully felt Down's variously

many pieces scanned
as sectioned successes through counters
in gestation to check building blocks
made king with establishment as oxygen not low
in utero for no retro brain problem
but life with a panapoly of panache
to pull proceeding as from pencil not eraser

my home I strip down for that womb
but it is striped with needing everything
for introduction so convey to the very
with a whisper of folding cloth
not crumpled afterwards meaningless
but display table for more discipline
as exercise didn't exhaust with single thought
between happen and hope or vice-versa
an hour not the of thus

so glad it was a good long one
not rushed from my side as to induce stop disk trouble
with strategy of seven otherwise
neither spontaneously aborted in dear diorama
no door double jump near mirror yet

not special without looking upon special way
further than drama but pat patience
clap without words yet
as unknown name I.D. phone calll
instigated me wanting to assist
yet there's one to become known as brocolli
marinated away of form goitrogen

and I could become clean match
as no magnifying glass upon grasshopper
but a finger
to go to the molting
not collapsing
unmelted by a tear
of address uncaged
by tame timing
as on off shoulder dress could be souvenir
or serve into conception etcetera

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 30, 2008

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    Oh my, you have written a novel here (almost) ~ such deeply thought provoking text and such a profound narrative therein. Thanks for your voice in this contest... x


    • mbm
      October 30, 2008
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      SummerGypsy a nervous venture ended with a sweet stamping

      ah, thanks for sensing what I didn't want as only new but delvable, without risking audience's need to do other things heavily ~

      I'm appreciating risk wasn't viewed as staying,
      called Carolyn