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Shape of Amnesia

We are like that Amnesic man
who forgets his name every morning.
What we read now in the newspaper
has happened even millenia back -
the crosshatched maps,
the disputed crosshatchs,
the Caesars, Cleopatras,
the gladiators, and colisiums.

We are the raindrops that sway free
without any political opinion,
the victims of our own inertness,
and howl when everything turns
violently visible and alive.

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  • Zahhar gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    We are we are.


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    October 29, 2008
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    Ain't it the truth. Same Stuff, Different Millennium.


  • aboomer silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    Don't forget to add your theme and POM to your author's notes.....

    This is so true - we only repeat history over and over and over - and don't really seem to learn much at all! Such a shame.

    best wishes in the contest.


  • cutiepie gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    This made me think of elections....each vying for recognition and promising the earth, until duly elected, changing their stance, breaking promises. Bravo and good luck in the contest