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INCOMPLETE ( The Girl and The Goat Head )

Oh deary me, oh deary me
Mister, could you please assist me?
I believe I have become a little lost
I do so hope I can find myself

  "
        Don't fear, little one
          I'll be happy to help you find your way
        Just tell me where
              And we'll both get there, ok? 
                                                                              "

Oh, do thank you very much
I am so very, very lost
I do not know what I would do
If I didn't have you

    "
        Trust me, little girl
      We will get there
                  You'll see
          Just take my hand
                You can trust me
                                                "

Oh, mister
Where are you going to take me?
I do very much think
We're going the wrong way

    "
          Don't worry, fair child
              I shall be taking you home
          With a warm fire true
                And walls made of stone
                                                            "

Author notes

I need to think this one through before I put any more down. I lost my direction somewhere along the way.

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