oh sweety;;
your so ugly on the
[inside]
syringes filled to the rim with failed attempts made
my knees [shake] && my bones [rattle].
You were a sellout in my eyes,&& those damned
butterflies you left fluttering between my ribcage are
finally falling down.
[honey,you made falling fun;;
oh.
so.
fun.]
Because I wanted you that day,&& I do now &&
I did yesterday,but damn if I let these feelings keep
pulsing through my vanes && shattering pieces of
my [weak] being.My crash sounded like the ending of
a love letter,&& i wouldent have it any other way.
I'll bring the trigger and a promise to pull it,if you
plant those feelings we had between the sidewalk dents
&& starve away those secrets,baby the world is
so ugly,&& your soul shines so bright,I'l still be your
wet dream super star && you can still be my reasons.
I want so bad to just slice you back into my world
&& I cant stop thinking about what may have
happened if you hadent gave up on me,if I had
scraped the dead skin from my body && decided
that maybe love wasent for losers after all.
But its to late now,&&
Im so scared to look back &&
need someone who's not there.
Author notes
my quote-
"I'll bring the trigger and a promise to pull it"
A contest entry
- I feel so dirty[[pretty]] --With a ~twist~-- by BenziRae.
720 points, ended November 19, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"I'll bring the trigger and a promise to pull it"-This reminds me of one of my favorite boys night out songs.
"if you
plant those feelings we had between the sidewalk dents && starve away those secrets,baby the world is so ugly,&& your soul shines so bright,I'l still be your wet dream super star && you can still be my reasons"- I love this verse, escpecially that last line
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"oh sweety;;
your so ugly on the
[inside]"
I love it, it's so sickly insulting =]
"I want so bad to just slice you back into my world
&& I cant stop thinking about what may have
happened if you hadent gave up on me"
This is exactly what I'm feeling right now.
I love this poem darling, it's amazing =D
Shelly
x
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This is gorgeous!
"baby the world is
so ugly,&& your soul shines so bright,I'l still be your
wet dream super star && you can still be my reasons."
That line made me go 'woahhh!' and I new exactly what you meant, cause I've been there, done that , and it ain't pretty.
But this is. It's utterly gorgeous. Never stop writing
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