T errible in his might and loosened fury
H onor and justice are his final victory.
E gocentric with conviction as his energy is pure
C ommanding recognition for his bravery and allure.
H ard discipline brings him success and wealth
A nchored, sphinx driven carriage gives him stealth.
R iding waves of the galaxy as a great ship on the ocean
I lluminates earth within all elements with emotion.
O pulent and rich in all the universal abundance,
T hriving on the spring of life, loving it all in decadence.
Author notes
An Acrostic
In a list
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- Trophies, Silver • next in list
- Journey of the Mind & Spirit • next in list
A contest entry
- The Chariot/Tarot Card 7 Major Arcana by Dark Otter.
700 points, ended November 1, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ohh! Tarot poetry. I have a bit of tarot poetry myself, on my account. This would be great to have in a book as an addition to the cards. You could make your own deck and use it as the book. Other than that, I think you have a great poem here and the meaning of the chariot is so rich and fully illustrated here. You have a great grasp on the meaning behind the cards. I don't usually like acrostic, but I'll make an acception this time and say that this was wonderful! I hope you finish the rest of the cards, because I for one would love to see what you have to say about the rest of them.
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the last line just does it for me.
I can't escape it.
congrats on your trophy
blessed be
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Thank you Otter
for the Silver trophy.
BB~
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I love it!!! This is so well written!!!
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Thank you.
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I like your acrostic
and I like what you say about the card. You have done a great job in bringing it to life. Thank you for another well done entry.
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