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After the Chapel

Nobody ever says I do

to tears, the bite of cruel words

nor the pain of being rejected.

 

Vows uttered by trusting, loving lips

always dream of happy endings,

only seeing two hearts that remain as one,

never getting lost to debt,

differences or disagreements.

 

No promises are prophets

for where the future will go,

it can grow as a wine

you savor and cherish

or turn dark and cold,

aching inside from the emptiness,

not feeling anything burn inside,

passion just left in pillow tales,

whatever thrived on wedding day,

now a silence between two strangers.

 

When that bond is broken

is when two live fall into a crevice,

wandering in the darkness

wondering where love’s light was lost.

 

Some never climb out of that emotional death,

slowly slipping away in their minds

until one day they say good bye

often in fiery resentment.

 

I chose to stay,

though the years weren’t kind in terms of joy,

but though it doesn’t bring the flowers

one craves in a nuptial garden

and at times the sadness suffocates,

part of me still clings to the album

where I once wore tux and she a white gown.

 

Still holding onto the illusion

some sunrise will come

when the heartache turns again to kisses.

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  • PerfectImperfection
    November 17, 2008

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    Awwww! This is such an emotional piece, but one I can certainly hold a respect for over all... The thoughts penned within are pained, and something that I think sadly many could relate to. I often wondered how hard it would be to simply go through the motions without the feeling, or how easy it would be to just walk away when keeping the vow of that love is so sacred. A very thought provoking piece. Congrats on the gold!


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    November 17, 2008

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    Beautifully written, very sad.

    I think this can happen so easily in a marriage. I think that lasting passion is a myth, the everydayness of marriage doesn't help. I found that deep respect, and a love for the goodness in my husband's soul sustains me through the crappy days. I hope it's the same for him.

  • Perfect Insanity
    November 4, 2008

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    I find this to be a very versatile piece for at times it is misleading thus creating such an effect for the reader as they keep on reading. You take us in from beginning to end with your tale of love and marriage and pain. This is a very raw piece, yet very descriptive upon your feelings and emotions.

    I am absolutely in love with the metaphors you have used. They do so much to this piece. All at once you cover about every aspect of this marriage that has hurt you, and yet you stay. It is hope that binds you rather than vows now, for she has already broken them.

    "Still holding onto the illusion
    some sunrise will come
    when the heartache turns again to kisses"

    Absolutely beautiful and yet painful. This is such an honesty piece and you sir are very, very loyal. Like you state in the beginning no one says I do to rejection, even after years have passed. It shows your strength and your unbending will to hope and wait. I am left with the desire to mention my thoughts on about every single one of your stanzas for they are so polished, and beautifully written, but I am very long-winded , and I'll probably write you a novel. I suffice it to say that I truly loved this piece, and I wish you luck, in both the contest and with this. ♥