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I Am Life As We Know It

I am a puzzle.
An assortment of shambles slowly coming together,
sewing together the fray of my existence.

I am the moon.
A crescent time teller in the light less empyrean,
revealing abandoned fantasies screened by cryptic shadows.

I am a grain of sand.
A piece of time to never be forgotten,
chasing the clock's hands alone confined within the hourglass of endings.

I am the sun.
An efflorescent Orb of prosperity,
reflecting miniature rainbows into the iris of our eyes.

I am a spectrum of color.
A smokey breath exposed in frosted air,
creating the eclectic radiance of dawn spilling across the macro sky.

I am the rain.
Liquid sunshine disguised as pearls,
drowning out the pseudo populace.

I am Life as we know it.
An ageless glow wild with fury,
Absent mindedly morphing into an asinine oddity.

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  • whiterabbit.
    October 29, 2008

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    I like this. It's unique and interesting. I like all of the different descriptions that you used. Great job and thanks for entering.