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Images of Winter

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                              Tall spruce trees standing

                                  angels in white gowns

                                     stretching out arms

                                        blowing in wind

                                          hushed silence

                                              lingers

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                Soft snowflakes dance

                                  down onto cheeks

                                   carpeting ground

                                    crunching boots

                                      leave imprints

                                       on pure sheets

                                      horizon's wonder

 

 

 

                                 Lacy hoar frost hangs

                                 Spider's web weaving

                                 Sun shining, gleaming

                               Sparkling, crystals

                                  Dripping into icy

                                        puddles

                               

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Rose Angel....Sights and sounds of winter

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    Thanks all for your encouragement..I did enjoy writing this as winter leaves indellible images in the mind to recall!


  • daviscth silver member
    November 17, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful imagery filled poem. Your words have created a fairy tale land of magic. Good luck in the contest dear.
    Cathy


  • Whispers of Hope
    November 12, 2008
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    Wow the imagery was just perfect This is a very well written piece you are very talented!


  • Beret55 silver member
    November 11, 2008
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    A great discription of a forist in snow.


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    November 7, 2008

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    I was just browsing and looking at some of your work.
    The caption of this caught my eye and just drew me right in. I love poetry about the Seasons and with a little imagination you can find beauty in all of them.
    In this piece you have brought out all the magic through your imagry of the falling Snow as it coveres the earth.
    Thank you for sharring this with us here on AP.

    Thank you for your beautiful comment on ( My Faith )it was much appreciated.


    ED.

  • Abnormal
    November 5, 2008
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    This is a really nice write. It has beautiful imagery and the way it just flows is great.
    My favourite lines were:
    "Soft snowflakes dance
    down onto cheeks
    carpeting ground
    crunching boots
    leave imprints
    on pure sheets
    horizon's wonder."
    I loved all of it though. I really like it!


  • ScarletO gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    This is very well written and I have been taken into a winter wonderous land of ice and snow with all the trimmings. Great descriptive words that give a feeling of the bitterness of winter and the beautify of it too.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Beautiful write and form.


  • Autumn Rain13
    November 1, 2008
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    Excellent, what great imagery... It really captures winters beauty! Lovely write!!!!!


  • WolfHeart
    October 29, 2008
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    Very pretty and filled with imagery. "angels in white gowns

    stretching out arms

    blowing in wind

    hushed silence

    lingers"
    I really love these lines. Sharp and effective words that blend into a wonderful poem.

  • deepheart
    October 29, 2008

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    Beautiful

    The sights and sounds of majestic beauty. What an awesome poem and a wonderful style of construction. This leaves one to dream of winter freedom and to be lost in a white wilderness with nothing but love and freedom.

  • goalsv
    October 29, 2008
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    A beautiful rendition that makes the beauty of nature just flow. Great job with the prompt.


  • Confusedboy
    October 29, 2008

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    sounds so inviting, love to do it with fur lined boots and foul weather gear, that would be wonderful walking in the snow. this was very nice. I used to enjoy looking for footprints of different animals, identifying the owner.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    Softly written delicate, and those feelings of the wonderment of winter are etched so well
    Best wishes Julie


  • adios muchachos gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    Hi Rose

    Looks like you've taken a good look at winter and made your report on the sights and sounds!
    Beautiful!

    John


  • Lady Michaella
    October 29, 2008

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    wow, this is beautiful. A very well done, I love this.
    xxxxx!!!
    btw, my favourite part is this stanza:
    Lacy hoar frost hangs

    Spider's web weaving

    Sun shining, gleaming

    Sparkling, crystals

    Dripping into icy

    puddles

    xxxx!!!
    this is stunning


  • maktub
    October 29, 2008
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    What beautiful imagery...a stunning piece, to say the least...
    Smile♫

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